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Sometimes your silence speaks louder than the colors of fall.
You think you're protecting me, but I'm not sheltered at all.
And I am lost in Septmeber, with everything I remember so strong...
And I am lost to the foilage, aimless lost souls just floating along
...
I can remember you smiling and taking my hand
Into a corridor of the arts where we faced no reprimands
And I am dancing in circles, under the tree waiting for his car
And I am playing dress-up, knee-high socks to cover the scars...
...

I am waiting by the calendar,
Dorothy, please don't tear it down
And I am sitting in a cellar
the walls are gone, but you're not around

...
I can remember the long walks that angered my mother
And I can remember how she looked when I told her 'it's over...'
Lost into a sea of brooding, your face the heavens in the storm
Chocolate truffles so soothing, it was you who should have been warned...
...
I am a silly girl with a heart stretched out so nostalgic
I suppose it wouldn't be beauty if it weren't so tragic...
And I am dancing in circles, it's not the same; something is wrong
And I am playing make-believe, that you were with me all along
...

I am waiting by the calendar,
Dorothy, please don't tear it down
You said these words were for forever
So why are you never around?

...
I can promise you treasure and castles of kings
But if you don't believe me, they don't mean a thing
I want you to look to me with the eyes of a fourteen-year-old
Before the December snowed down and made your tone so very cold...

So Dorothy please!

Stop crying; no one's dying
They're all dead anyway, announce what you have to say
Please stop fighting; only your fears are alighting
if you have no spite for me,
Return this memory of the fall.
:icondemented-gummy-frogz:

Author's Comments

I know, I know... you hate that name... But I wanted it to be significant, so I suppose we'll just deal with it. Haha.

This is a slow song. Soft and faint... picks up at the end with the piano that isn't playing... because this is DA, and I don't know how to play the piano ^^ then it gets soft again... +blinks+ Just to clearify. I have the tune in my head, but of course, you can't hear it, so hey... +shrugs+ lol

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:iconfractionofamemory:
i love the imager and word choice in this! its very vivid and it tells a story in a great way. it conveys real life feelings that i can definently relate too. amazing!

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bury your thoughts on a page of no lines.
:icondemented-gummy-frogz:
^____^ I love having you around, lol. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and thank you!

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Orcestra; we're all mad here
:iconfractionofamemory:
lol thanks and you too! youre a very inspiring writer and you have great ideas. i only speak the truth lol

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bury your thoughts on a page of no lines.
:iconmisakochan:
this is amazing ^^ I can see all the little symbolisms and references/allusions
The flow here is incredible and the mood and everything...I think this is my favourite of your pieces =3
oh, I definately want to here the tune to this, I kind of gave it my own, but I'm sure yours is better xD

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Rhea: Let's find a spare book to write down all our quotes. Do you have a book that's not important? How about this book? Is this ok?"
Ann: "That would be the Bible."
:iconknowingescape:
Beautiful. I absolutely love it. You are really good. Wish I could hear the tune...:+fav:
:icondemented-gummy-frogz:
Nuh, yours might be better ^^ Haha... I think this is my favorite one, too. Sqeee =3 Into a corridor of the arts where we faced no repremands; haha, A-building X3

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Orcestra; we're all mad here
:icondemented-gummy-frogz:
Thank you so much! x3 +runs off to check your gallery+

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Orcestra; we're all mad here
:icondemented-gummy-frogz:
Hey... show it to Heinegg XD

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Orcestra; we're all mad here
:iconglxyds:
I enjoy this too. I think everyone who reads your stuff likes it.
I enjoy the way it starts off and the way it ends. =)

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